They say writing is cathartic, but used to describe my mothers succumbing virtually killed me | Erin Vincent

October 18, 2017

Writing about her parents being killed when she was 14 forced Erin Vincent to relive the trauma for over six years. It brought her to the brink of suicide

Before writing a memoir about my mothers dying in a road accident when I was 14 I ran around saying, So my parents succumbed, whats the big deal? I wholeheartedly believed that I had come away unscathed. When the issue of parents came up in conversation I would say, Oh, my parents are retired; they live up the coast. I figured I wasnt lying as they had retired, from life, and if you believe in life after death, which I do and dont, depending on the day, they were living up from the coast, all coasts.

So, how did I go from death denier to published memoir novelist? Quite by accident.

I had just turned 30 and was starting to remember things from before my parents accident. We hear so much about people repressing traumatic memories but we humans also tend to repress good ones if they serve to remind us of all that weve lost. So in anxiety of losing the memories again I started writing them down and turning them into narratives for myself. I figured that if I lost them a second hour I could just go back to what I had written.

As I remembered days at the beach, my fathers weird pastimes, and my mother dancing around the house to her Neil Diamond records, I started to feel compelled to also write about what life was like after they were run. So I steeled myself and wrote about wearing a hot pink dress to my mothers funeral. I wrote about the constant fear that my three-year-old brother would die if I took my eyes off him for merely one moment “when hes” out in the world. I wrote about the evening of my parents collision and being told my mother was dead.

After several weeks of this it occurred to me that I was writing the various kinds of narratives I wished Id had when I was in the midst of grief and believed I was losing my intellect as I struggled to get up each day each day and go to school, and once there, try not to run from the classroom screaming. So, on I wrote.

After reading a few of my narratives my husband indicated I write a volume. This was the era of Angelas Ashes and Running With Scissors and he jokingly said, Hey, when it comes to sad tales two dead mothers trumps them all. He was wrong of course but thought it would exhort me on.

I defied for a long time but then wondered if I could write a raw and honest book about my own heartbreak that might actually be of use to some people; maybe help them feel less alone than I did when I read grief books with encompass photos of lavender fields and sunsets that told me grief came in five( only five ?!) stages and that grief was like the rainfall. Grief is nothing like the fucking rain, I guessed. If anything, sorrow is like being lost at sea in a fury hurricane.

So to dispel those myths I decided to write a memoir about my experience and frankly believed I could knock it out in six months. How hard could it be? Id been a journalist used to describe other people, so writing about myself, a topic I knew well, would be a cinch.

How incorrect I was about the penning, and about myself.

About a year into the writing I wondered why I was so tired all the time; why after writing for an hour or two all I would want to do was sleep. I thought I was just being lazy so I pushed myself harder.

Determined to recollect as many details as possible I decided to bombard my senses. I bought Cds of the music from my childhood and items with familiar odors such as Play Doh, my papas Old Spice, Brut, my sisters Charlie perfume, the 4711 cologne my mother used to wear, the brand of glue I being implemented in elementary school. And there I sat at my desk writing, sniffing and listening to Barry Manilow, Whitney Houston, The Police, Blondie, Herb Alpert and the Tijuana Brass, Neil Diamond.

Not long after this I became itchy, literally. Large red hives started appearing all over my body. Convinced I was having some kind of allergic reaction I proceeded to change soap, laundry cleanser, shampoo, and I stopped reeking the incenses and aftershaves, but nothing ran. Then came the debilitating belly pains, diarrhoea, and vomiting, which led me to hospital for a colonoscopy, which found nothing. I became listless, was exclaiming on a daily basis, my hair became limp, my nails brittle, and eventually I had trouble getting out of bed. And yet , not once did I attribute any of this to what I was writing.

And then one night I chose I couldnt go on and that my husbands life would be more joyous without his sick, miserable wife. I had it all schemed. I was going to write a note that said something along the lines of, Babe, do not enter. Just call the police. I love you. This was going to be taped to the bathroom doorway before I locked it, sliced my wrists and laid in a warm bath and floated away. But then I thought about heartache, something that was on my mind daily. Could I set him through that? I tried to reason with myself, But once the grief is run, he can live a happy life. But still grief. Could I, of all people, cause the person I loved most in the world to experience what I had? No, I couldnt. So the note was never written. Instead I put the razor away, collapsed on to our bed in a sobbing heap and wondered how I would go on. Somehow I did. And I kept writing, in shorter spurts now that my energy was so low.

As I sat at my desk one afternoon, staring out the window because I was too tired to do anything else, my teary-eyed husband, handed me a printout and said, I think this might be you. It was a depression checklist that hed detected whilst doing some research for a photo series he was working on. And then it all made sense. I was depressed. How did I not see it?

We “was talkin about a” me discontinuing the writing but I explained that I couldnt. I had come this far and it would all be for nothing if I didnt finish. So we came up with a plan. I would only write for one hour a day and would go and watch a psychologist to see if she could help me get through it. I also went on antidepressants which eventually lead to a host of physical and mental health issues that I am still retrieving from.( This past year I went through hell trying to ween off the narcotic Cymbalta)

So with a loving husband, psychologist, and pharmaceutical narcotics in tow, I wrote and eventually finished my memoir. It would be a couple of years before I sold it to a publisher and had to go through the whole experience again during the editing process. By the time I was done I had relived the night of my parents collision on a daily basis for six years. I believed I was numbing myself but I have since discovered that I was actually rewiring my brain.

Studies have shown that replaying traumatic events over and over again is equivalent to living them, in your brain and your body. Your brain reads the information as though the event is happening in that instant. I lately read Dr. Bessel Van Der Kolks book The Body Keeps The Score in which he says, Flashbacks and reliving are in some ways worse than the trauma itself a traumatic event has a beginning and an objective but a flashback can happen anywhere, anytime and for an indeterminable duration of time.

Suddenly it all made sense. By writing my volume I had unwittingly re-traumatised myself and have expended the past 10 years trying to find my way back.

Its funny, the main thing people say to me when discussing my book is how cathartic the write must have been. I know they want me to say that it was, but I refuse to perpetuate the lie that writing about your ache is liberate when that is not always the case.

And now when people tell me they plan to write a memoir I want to caution them about the possible costs of such an endeavour. And yet, I want to be supportive, I dont want to be members of the public who tries to kill a writers dreams.

Writing a book isnt easy but dredging up your past and used to describe it can be self-inflicted torture.

But who am I to tell you not to embark on that memoir? All I can say is: youve been cautioned.

In Australia, the crisis support service Lifeline is on 13 11 14.
In the UK, the Samaritans can be contacted on 116 123.
In the US, the National Suicide Prevention Hotline is 1-800-273-8255.

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